Reviews for Smooth Criminal
Guest chapter 15 . 10/12/2019
I love this bad ass Elsa! Don't mess with her Anna
Guest chapter 14 . 10/12/2019
For some reason I'd love to see these two at a gun range
Guest chapter 13 . 10/12/2019
It almost seems like someone's setting Anna up to be in the crosshairs
Guest chapter 9 . 10/11/2019
Omg I lied this chapter! The meeting lol
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2019
Awww these two cute idiots
Guest chapter 14 . 10/11/2019
Omg these two! I need more! I need to know how this ends.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/11/2019
Oh Elsa protect Anna! I feel like someone's going to get shot
Guest chapter 15 . 10/11/2019
Omg I need more
Trisha chapter 15 . 7/20/2018
Lovely story. How is it going to end?
Lesbi-Elsa chapter 15 . 7/22/2018
And that’s all she wrote.

I really liked this so far, one of the best stories I’ve ever read. I really hope you do fun the time to update as stories like these are extremely rare and I’d hate for it not to be completed. Hope you’re okay.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2017
Thus far, this story is f$?!ing perfect! D
ApNxEch0 chapter 15 . 4/22/2017
m;lk;lkjljhugtexc o;'oilhbbdhl; UPDATE
ThePotatoKing-Queen chapter 15 . 2/9/2017
i hope you havent forgotten of this fic because dang its good and you left me with wanting for more. plz update when u have time
woodchuckle chapter 15 . 2/1/2017
Any chance of update? Even not, thanks for the good story.
AceVermin143 chapter 15 . 11/7/2016
Any chance of a new chapter? Please!
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