Reviews for Laying Claim
Dream-Runaway chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
So heartbreakingly sweet! I love it! Their characterizations are always so good when written by you. I'm so glad you have a few, thank you!
Somebody knows chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
I feel bad for Sebastian and Mary.

Fantastic writing!
iloverob32 chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
The picture you paint of Bash when he came in her room, left me salivating! Barefoot! Sexy Bash! I admit, I was surprised that you had Mary lie. But then I thought, maybe she would lie to save Bash. Perhaps the one person she would lie for. Oh! And I loved the "claiming" banter! This was absolutely fantastic!
kqshipalot chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Loved it!
Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I thought this was well written! I knew that Mary and Francis were going to get together because of history, but I was still upset when Mary broke off her and Bash's engagement. Great work!
tmblack chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Ahhh soothes my ravaged soul! Thank you very much!
Marie Meyers chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Lived it!
queenoftheworldliza chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I love this so so so much. Thank you for writing it!
chrisrose chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Glad you're still writing Mash fics. :) This is probably the best possible follow-up to that last horrific episode. Thanks for trying to make us all feel better! Although I'd rather ignore 1x13 canon entirely...can't really forgive ShowMary (and the show's writers) ...not for Frary marrying, which I expected, but the way it happened (I much prefer *your* "Consummation" story!) But I'll try to imagine YourMary didn't give Bash up so easily, and fought harder to protect him. (It helps that you've written her vowing to protect him, and tricking Francis in order to rescue Bash from the dungeon. That reminds me of how much I love your Badass!Protective!Mary rescuing Bash in "No Sound But The Wind." Aah, what a great fic!) Yeah, I've got to be selective now in my head-canon... otherwise I can't really ship Mash anymore...just want Bash to get far away from everyone who caused him pain, including Mary! Anyway, hope you keep writing and keep healing traumatized Mash fans... you know I love your style. :)
crysren chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I love this so much. Truly hoping that this is a scenario we will get to see play out on screen. Mary admitting she made a mistake! Bash vowing to love her from the shadows! Pretending to be in a different life together! Best.
pgoodrichboggs chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Awesome as usual! Thank you for the Mash love and for healing our hearts a bit after episode 13. Keep updating, please.