| Reviews for At Long Last, You Surrender |
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   Ten-n-Rose chapter 1 . 8/22/2017 How stunning and perfect this is, I have no words. Never stop because you have an awesome gift. |
| girlonfire44 chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 This was lovely. I loved the style even if it was a bit to get used to. |
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 2/6/2015 perfectly put. She calls him her Doctor and that was always completely true but he was always hers |
| Devoglio S chapter 1 . 7/22/2014 Okay, this is officially the coolest fanfic I've ever read. I can't believe someone even wrote a fic in second person, and not only did you go for it, you did FANTASTIC. This is absolutely gorgeous, and you kept it remarkably in-character. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! |
| artist369 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Lovely! The tense throws me off. It's kind of like, second person or something, but it's done well. I like the imagery you invoke. Thanks for writing this! |
| Emily chapter 1 . 4/30/2014 this was the most beautiful thing I've ever read |
| Paperclip-Assassin chapter 1 . 4/6/2014 Oh god I cried. This... this is perfect. Thank you. |
| BrowsingAbout chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Very well done, and the ending was so refreshingly angst free! I was bracing myself for the "Rose Tyler, I-" and was happy that this ended the way we all wanted it to! I'll pretend this happened. :) I also loved the tense, and the thought process was very much The Doctor. |
| riley chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL AHHHHHHHHH |
| Robyn chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 hey, I thought your use of the second person narrative was really good. It's quite unusual to see, even more unusual that someone is able to pull it off. Well done ! |
| ticklethedragon1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 Oh. My. God. That was amazing. I hate that I have company over because I feel like crying and freaking out and reading that all over again because it's so happy-making. I can't even choose a favourite line, because there are too many and they're all too beautiful. I love this. You are an incredible writer and your ability to wield this style/tense to your advantage is unparalleled. Ugh. Mild irritation now. You realize that I'm going to have to go back to reading mediocre fanfiction now, right? Bravo. |
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 omg I love this just so awww |
| the-smarsh chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 This was absolutely wonderful! I almost didn't want to read to the end because I thought it would be this angst filled ending but thankfully, THANKFULLY, you didn't end it that way. |
| CindyDee chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 Absolutely wonderful! |
| TenRose4ever chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 Awww, this was just what I needed to read! Beautiful! I loved the use of the second person tense: unusual, but powerful, because it implies someone looking in is able to read into his soul. Thank-you for this little gem! |
