More please

Lol boob joke

I've read both versions and I like them both. Please finish it

Thank you for writing again! I'm glad you started again. These days I see too many authors leave FanFiction with stories unfinished. These chapters were great. I hope to see more rivarly against Rouge and Stranger. Him handing her to the outlaws;Great idea! That for sure sounds like something he'd do. I think he's the type who throw anyone out in the open to save his own butt and get his moolah. If I don't hear from you again, have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year.

Hi I know you have moved accounts and you might not see this review.
I recently read this and have enjoyed it very much. I like the idea of Stranger having to compete against another bounty hunter, that one being a girl no less. I never thought of that but I guess it would be obvious he doesn't like rivals to compete against. I read the original and I can see why you rewritten it. However what I have noticed is on your new Account. There is nothing. NOTHING. This makes me very depressed. I really wanna see this story finished. I hate when A Story I love gets cancelled, This has happened to me many times before on this website. I recently got into Stranger's Wrath and I'm currentl writing a few stories in the Oddworld Theme. If you do read this. Please can you answer me and tell me why I can't find anything on your new account. Anyway, I'm Hoping I'll see this story finished one day!

I'm enjoying this story quite a bit, I hope you continue it!

Continue please. What's gonna happen next?

So awesome what happens next? I am continue cooltreeko. Your friend beasta. P.s. I have nothing else to read. You rock.

That was so fantastic

cant wait for the next chapter! remember Stranger isnt too aggressive, so when stranger and rogue fighti feel like he would be more likely to just be passive aggresive and let rogue yell right? just a thought.

Plz update soon I can't wait to read the rest

This story is awesome! Of course ur original one was very well written as well, I just hope u continue. u nvr see Stranger/OC stories out there and yours is definitely great! so plz plz plz continue this..

COOL i love it

Epic story c: I love it, please update soon c: