well J'ohn and Superman have someone to relate to.

im sorry but YESSSS ALFRED and FUUUUUCCCCCKKKKk CLOCKWORK

Wow. This story is really amazing so far! Please update!

I LOVED this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OXD
I'm gonna go read the sequel now! ! ! ! OXD

This is so good!

That last sentence. *sob*.

But, the story’s still awesome!

that last sentence is going to make me cry. like seriously, "he called me Danny"just bROKE my heart, and I think I'm gonna go and cry now, maybe question my entire existence and why I do this to myself

awesome~

First off, I really love this did a great job opening it with the mystery of the thermos. Until Danny fell out of it, I thought it was Dan inside. Danny's reactions to the major superheros was great, too. Brings their egos down a little bit when they meet someone who doesn't know who they are. Though I am sad to see Clockwork and Frostbite go. I always liked them. I'm also wicked excited that you're writing a sequel to it.

One thing to maybe look out for is typos. Your writing is great quality with narration, description, and dialogue, but some of the grammatical and spelling typos get a little distracting. I find reading the chapter out loud to myself helps me catch all the minor things I would miss otherwise (even then things can still slip by if I'm distracted). (Also using the Celsius temperature for body heat threw me off for a second, in the US we use Fahrenheit because we like making things difficult for ourselves and everyone else.)

Anyway, love the story. Thank you for posting and starting a sequel. It saves me having to ask for one! :D

*sniffles sadly*

'damn feels'

Good job with the long explanation.

Aww man, the feels has got to me! Nooo! *falls down*
Vex: Quit being such a drama queen.
Anyway, this story is really good, and I plan on reading the sequel.

AND THERE GOES ANY EMOTIONS I EVER HAD

Dude wtf, this isn't complete at all. Don't say it is if it isn't. I try to filter this out but I still get crap like this.

That was really good.

*goes to read sequel*