this story has captivated me for so long! the thing with the rings and the dream about Alistair giving Arthur the ring is such good material and it makes me look forward to more. it is the sort of story you remember, nightmares and all

This is very intresting.

This keeps getting better and better. I love this chapter! Definitely looking forward to whatever happens next.

You've called Felix: Vash and Lukas. You might need to fix that. But it looks really good so far.

This...is a freaking amazing chapter. This story is really putting me on edge now. I was, like, freaking out when they had to hide under the water and when Lilli was in the safe room with that freak scratching at the door. Francis gives me the chills. (And I have a tarantula, so that's saying something.) But I'm glad most of them are safe now. Hope Arthur can find his brother and the other girl without getting caught. I wonder if Francis can sense when someone uses the ring...kind of like in Lord of the Rings. If that's the case, then Arthur's in trouble.

This was creepy and awesome :)

Mm. I wonder what really happened to Mattie's mother, since she obviously didn't take him away somewhere...

My poor Nordics. TT_TT

Man, Francis is crazy. Arthur just fell into the trap...ugh. I hope they all come out alright.

This story is great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow. This story is just crazy. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna know what's been happening to Alistair and Arthur.

Woah this is weird but it's awesome please update it really want to know what the hell it is that is keeping Canada and scotland