Reviews for One in Nineteen |
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kimchi759 chapter 19 . 8/4/2019 Oof. Conflicted. I’m enjoying this story. I love the mesh of my favorites — an adult protagonist, a lead with a past unrelated to canon characters/her love interests, a nonhuman lead, etc. Ally’s independent, assertive personality, her friendship with Jenna, her history with Eli, all of it. It’s great. But this last chapter had me cringing. A make out sesh right after he disrespected her wishes and physically/painfully violated her person? Yikes! I definitely wanted more than a smirk, a warning, and a kiss from Ally after he did that. Thank you for writing/sharing! |
Arkytior's Song chapter 19 . 1/18/2018 Love this! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/31/2017 Love it. Can't wait it read more. |
ShadowSpade chapter 19 . 9/18/2017 It'll be interesting to see what happens with the sire bond once Tyler becomes a hybrid since he recognizes Ally as his Alpha...and I don't think Ally will be very happy with Klaus when he kills/turns a member of her pack |
KEZZ 1 chapter 19 . 9/17/2017 fabulous chapter |
Anon13576957465962 chapter 1 . 9/17/2017 Good start! Hattie and Stefan seemed like a great pair. |
ShadowSpade chapter 18 . 5/10/2017 I think Damon might go slightly postal when he finds out about Ally and Elijah...I'm interested to see Klaus' reaction to Ally |
SomebodyWhoCares chapter 18 . 3/26/2017 Damn... it left me speeches |
singlemompride chapter 18 . 3/20/2017 damn...wow! i cant wait for the next chappy. all i can think about is that if Ally and Damon get together. their dynamics will be interesting. will dominant damon submit to alpha ally or will alpha female meet her match. i look fwd to the develop ment of this story... kinda wonder if ally could get knocked up...? interesting thought. i dont feel like its your plan, but who knows. |
RHatch89 chapter 18 . 3/13/2017 Awesome update :) |
Chloe chapter 18 . 3/13/2017 Yes I love it, update soon |
Heena Patel chapter 17 . 2/5/2017 This story is great. I hope that she sends up with Elijah, even though she most likely will end up with Damon. But I think that her and Elijah would make a interesting couple. Do you know who she is going to end up with in the end? Also does she have a pack, and if she does are we going to meet them? |
RHatch89 chapter 17 . 2/4/2017 Awesome update :) |
KEZZ 1 chapter 17 . 2/4/2017 Great chapter :-D I am looking forward to reading more ;-) |
BeccaSco chapter 16 . 1/30/2017 Love this! |