Reviews for Kiss The Girl
Mirage chapter 27 . 7/11
When a horse would eat only so much one could sage a lot of money with there feed -
Even when he does not haveich time to teach her to ride and drive the seahorses , why not let her walk...swim them ? And groundwork and on the lung line, is also good training -

Hope she sees that it is alright been taken care of now and then bevor he is found out ...could make things more easy and when she got a work...like something with small mermaid and merman children. ..or with the seahorses.. or singing

...but can she even read and write ?

Will be interesting to see how they search for human items on there adventure
Also how the meet and great with his sister will go :)

So when will she meet Arel father ...how will she find out who he is...
Mirage chapter 13 . 7/10
Why is she so against him buying her things? With her mother and grandfather she also had no trouble when she did destroy the high prized school dress again and again.. and not wearing simply jeans or other pants ... also all the food and supplies and gift and meds could not have been sheap. ...

Also miroku did make the money and did bring it into there group also made it so that they could rest for a day or more for free in some Inn or nobles or such house and eat often free food. .so she also did not have trouble with this. ...or when inu or the other did help her... so why axing like a sully teen now?

Poor Arel- such a stupid childish young woman he wants to woe - so much work hope he let's him nor drip like kpuga as just friends...
She really needs to learn to open up ...be more happy .and accept love and being taken care of now and then...be it from one or two

Will this become a three some with the human prince...and will Eric maybe turn merman too ?
Mirage chapter 3 . 7/10
Cute ...a male Ariel Arel sound nice but a little naive-
Will they still find Eric?
marianyelilisbeth chapter 27 . 6/30
Por favor sigue la historia está muy buenaaaaa
Naughty DarkVixen chapter 1 . 6/13
It’s a great story please continue.
Naughty DarkVixen chapter 26 . 6/13
This is really amazing. I can’t wait till kagome finds out he is a prince. I hope you continue this story and that the negative reviews don’t discourage you from progressing the story. Hope you update soon.
Naughty DarkVixen chapter 27 . 6/11
I love the way the story is going and I hope you continue this story I can’t wait till Kagome finds out he’s a prince to see her reaction. I also hope none of the negative reviews stop you from finishing this story it’s really amazing.
TOTHELOSERWRITER chapter 27 . 6/3
Your stories are short, not intriguing what so ever AND you are a sloppy writer. Do us all a fucking favor either delete your account or write better, longer characters. And pick someone else to use for stories other than JUST Kagome. Ever heard of ocs? Fucking useless moron that you are probably doesn't know. THANKS FOR NOTHING!
mallarieTwinkies chapter 27 . 5/24
amazing
TheVampyricAssassin chapter 27 . 5/19
Yay you updated! I love this story! Can't wait for kagome and arel relationship to grow.
FooFaFie chapter 27 . 5/18
this was a cute chapter a little insight into what Kagome's life is like at the inn although I find her lack of interest (in previous chapters) on why every one acts so strangely over her blooming friendship with Arel a little unusual, Kagome is nosy and just can't seem to mind her own business (and she's pretty close to this one.)

can't wait for to meet an excitable sister of underwater mischievous prince charming.
yan gomez chapter 27 . 5/18
Gracias por actualizar ! Amo esta historia !
Shannyrox101 chapter 27 . 5/18
YES THIS IS MY ALL TIME FAVORITE INUYAHSA CROSSOVER! Thank you for updating and not abandoning this story! I absolutely love the chemistry between Arel and Kagome!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 27 . 5/17
I love it!
Elizabeth chapter 27 . 5/17
Yeah you updated! I hope to see Kagome riding soon. Will Arel have Stormy or a different seashore? I can't wait are next! I wonder how many know that Arel is hiding his princely title from Kagome? I mean the inn people, a guard, Flounder, Sebastian, and a sister. So I think all of his sister's know now and the poor fellow will be late for "adventure"/date. I wonder if a few would "ran into them" and meet Kagome. I wonder if Kagome would almost choke when she finds this is not all of his sister and is this youngest of ? Children. I wonder if she would ask how their mother kept up with them all. Also will Kagome reveal her thoughts about people in charge. I think Kagome would want to stay as far from lords, ladies, and royalties as she can. To Arel dismay.

Also with suitors coming to visit I wonder how many people will protect Kagome and Arel relationship. Like if a suitor tries to get Kagome someone would step in to distract them and another to "lead" Kagome away. Will the citizens take to Kagome like Arel?

Will their adventure lead to them saving Prince Erik and begin his obsession with Kagome?

Please update soon

Ps will Kagome end up being a nurse/student of a mermaid doctor? And will it be a suitor or the king who reveal Arel status?
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