Reviews for The Trip to Arrendale
Pokemonfan4life chapter 1 . 11/14/2018
Aw, This was so cute.
jettmanas chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Nice job! I always wondered Anna never made an appearance in a Sofia episode (though Olaf did).
Enjoyed all the different things the characters had going on & the idea for the OC.
Junior VB chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Buen trabajo.
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Good job.
DragonKing19 chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
I love it.

Olaf is funny
Elsa Dellearen chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
I love it for a beginning u should make a part wher elsa and anna go to encahncia and something with Cedric's evil schemes
Panda Palooza chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
This is cute ;) I love seeing these two stories meshed together.
Disney Syndulla chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
It would be cool if they had an episode where Elsa and Ana help Amber and Sofia with a sister problem...
Aya chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
good don't tell anyone it is in my ...
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Nice
fall.spring chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
nice
ptahaegyptus2 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
This is an excellent story with just the right level of vocabulary and plot to be published as a crossover commercially. Anyone whose kids love both the worlds this story crosses (Sophia and Frozen) should read this as a bedtime story.

This is more Olaf centric than Elsa/Anna, which is exactly what Olaf's role in the movie was. It's also more sophia-world than frozen-world, which is exactly right. I'm a fan-boy of Frozen, and the only thing that would have made this story a bit more perfect would have been Elsa saying, while dressing down the servant, that he'd better get used to having kids around the castle since she and Anna were planning to have some. With all the ships regarding Elsa that are around, A hint that Elsa's intentional and looking would be a nice touch of fanservice to the Frozen-auts.

The only other thing that would have improved the story would have pulled in Kristoff and Sven giving rides. and tossing in a carrot. Definitely a carrot.

I would like to be constructive and suggest some plot lines: Elsa and Anna, with Olaf and Svetlana, visit Enchancia to reference books and records regarding Elsa's powers. Another would be some situation separating Sophia and Amber, with one or the other quarantined, with Elsa and Anna doing the cameo, one appearing to the other and explaining how they, in retrospect, would have dealt with the situation. This would really be a good growth story because even Queens and Princesses have to learn life lessons after they grow up. Another issue that the same story could address is the fact that Amber doesn't have a Princess-summoning locket/necklace, but that Amber doesn't need it being trained as a princess from birth, while Sophia needs it because she's late to the game. Anna and Elsa, as sisters, with Elsa getting "special" treatment because she's going to be the Queen regnant, are tailor made to address the issue of inter-sibling envy and the need to accept that extra attention given to one is necessary because of some situation bigger than both of them, and thus meriting extra love and understanding.

Sweet, sweet story.
mariz chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
gusto ko makita si elsa
MisuteriTenshi chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
You've inspired me!
Femke-the-lotus chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
This was really a amazing story! keep up the amazing work! from grovyle the thief lover
rtgshthgtr chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
love it,but could have had more anna clumsy-breakstuffness in it
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