If you ever get the chance to finish the M rated version of this you should on archive of our own. It's a shame that you were bullied to delete it on here. It was good

please update and finish the story.

Just loved this chapter 12

This is a great story its easy to read and makes you want to keep reading it.

Love this story please please can you write the next chapter soon. Please Tarlia has to have broken heart and Kensi and Deeks have to get married and start a family.

PLEASE UPDATE !1

Hey ! I found this story in some 'old' favorite fics, theres no update in quite a while ... and I had the link for th site as well, but the link was off ... Im guessing the story was deleted? or moved? I SO love these stories, I wish you can continue them ... can you tell me? thanks !

I can't seam to find the M story you wrote. Is it some wear else. You are doing a great job with this story.

I stumbled across your story and couldn't stop reading, it's great! I really hope you'll find some time to finish it, it would be even better with an ending (and epilogue...?) ;) Please update soon!

I just started this story yesterday and loved it please tell me their is more than one chapter to go PLEASE.

I absolutely love this story and hope you finish the story! I can't wait to learn what the end it!

do a chapter 21

please post more chapters today

I like so much this Chapter. Good job!

Thank you for writing for us. I like very much read Your story. I think you're very good. I hope you continue wrinting this story or other about densi.