Reviews for Breathing (Air that Burns like Razorblades)
just drifting chapter 3 . 6/5/2016
Ouch! This was phenomenal. I'm sad you never went further than this but what you did give us was wonderful and raw and felt so in character. It's so disappointing we never got more of these two on the show.
Kiki chapter 3 . 4/1/2014
Oh Shaw, the woman of minimal words and feelings as possible.

Please continue.
ravenhusker chapter 3 . 4/1/2014
Now that I've figured out where you're going with this, it's time for me to check out. I'm just not into slash. I buy the Carter Shaw connection yes, just not the sexual connection. Didn't see it on the show. I know this is the fic world bit the buck stops here for me.
zenbon zakura chapter 2 . 3/8/2014
i think shaw wants cole? i think? her late partner back...
ravenhusker chapter 2 . 3/8/2014
This is good. Interesting. Would love to see more. Shaw is an enigma. For a person that doesn't seem to have any emotions, she sure seems to be fighting down a lot. Would love to see how Reese would react to a visit from Carter in this form. And though Carter was told to stay away from Finch (and I see why, after that discussion), I would love to see her mess with him. That would be a good laugh. :)
Calleigh chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I check every hour for an update. Going crazy! :-p
Joan chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
I'm a big fan of Shaw so I got really caught by your story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
ravenhusker chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Ok you just can't leave us with that cliffhanger...you pulled me in. Now I need to know about this "job". This was pretty good :) Can you imagine this on the show? Finch would have Shaw institutionalized- provided that he could coral her :)
Tariel H chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
This was fantastic. It felt raw, and you tap into Shaw's character beautifully, the way she grudgingly accepts Carter's help from the grave, which was a great twist. The little insights into Carter and Shaw's relationship was great, I always wanted more interaction between the two.
Honestly I thought Shaw was hallucinating but that ending proved me wrong. I hope you continue with this!
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
haunted glasses eh?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Wow. Total mind blown (is that the correct term). Gosh I love what you are doing so far. Carter is reaching out to Shaw beyond the grave.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Oh love this. I really love all the writers who can get into the character's mind, especially about their relationships about each other. Carter & Shaw could've been Thelma & Louise!