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   rainaneema chapter 1 . 3/6/2014 awsome os cute one |
| khushboo chapter 1 . 3/5/2014 this was just sweet and simple... poor rey :) loved it very much... P.S.-i am waiting for Emerald Kiss |
| yogini.64 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 freakkk... that was quite different... poor rey... ek saal wait karvaya kriya ne public me jane k liye... maana chup chup ke pyar ka maza hi kuch aur h... ;) but inke case me toh kuch zyada hi pange ho jate h roz roz... :P they are fighting... vo bhi ainvayi .. ufff hawww ... chalu rey... ek book se kitna chup jata h vaise... logo ko shaq nhi padta :P he's so smart... usse puche bina bhi kuch nhi kiya... aur apni baat manva bhi li... |
| DarkRoseShadow chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 See I love this quality of yours... Its amazing... using only few words you paint such a visual imagery... I wish I could do like this... Honestly... I mean you know how you give that look... That you could just imagine... And the emphasis on the dialects... You can just imagine that pouty tone of Kiri and Rey ki manaofying tone... It is so adorable... You should often write mush... I kno feels weird coming from me.. But I just love how you show that tone of theirs... Adorable... _ And I love how you draw parallel of Rey an Kria... The sweet insecurities... and everything... though it kinda irks me too kabhi kabhi... lekin jo bhi ho adorable... The sweetest thing of this OS was how the anger changed... From rey being angry to Kiri... How she wraps him around her kiri finger... awww... And just how he coax her out ... Awesome... Beautiful OS... Treat to read... _ |
| ramyapranusha chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 aww... that was so cute! i totally love the way they made up! hehe thanx for the pm ankita :) |
| Nia chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 Ankitaaa! I love you, you know that? You are the best! I love love loved it to the core! The naughty, underhanded, sultry Reyaansh was amazing! It's been quite a while since you written him like this right? And I've always loved the stubborn Kria whose stubbornness in the end proves to be of no use :P It was cute :D You just made my day, just the escape I needed. Now I get back to studies and pending work happily :D |
| Rupanshi Garg chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 Gud one.. I lovd it seriously.. :)) |
| purpleorchid09 chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 Its so beautiful lovd it |
| Asma chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 Rey made it public at the end He did what he wanted to do... kriya tho bus aise hi reh gayii |
| dancersqueen chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 awesome os... |
| cherry chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 Beautiful os Loved it |
| k.sweet chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 superb amazing one n kriyaansh were so nice thanks for the pm |
| sadafkhalid872 chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 It was cute chotu sa os I luved it Really want to read more stories lyk this before going inactive Becoz sooon my exams will be starting :) And i need to study hard to get gud marks Thanku for pm |
| MereWhispers chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 Woooowwww... ! That was such a sww-eeet thingie ! :D Loved it to no bounds dii! I really-really miss those typical Kria-Reyaansh moments, that were 'sweet', 'cute', n without 'unnecesary passion'... :( Sacchi mein, am hating the current D3 track like anything... I've stopped watching it from past three days :/ N aise time pe, ur writing such a piece was bliss... Pure out n out bliss... :* :D The super-jelo Kria was a bit tooo cute ! N the tensi-fied Rey was great fun as well ! N that line... "Do NOT Kiri me!" I literally went mad laughing... :'D N the most charmie part - the way he made it public... Aww... I just went mad over it ! Such a cutie-pie piece of work dii... Love u for this... :* Thank u soooo much for writing this...! :P N thanks for the PM, as well... :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 wow...i lovd it...suprb os... |
