Can't wait for prodigal son

I'm shocked at the revelation. Great chapter.

Oh yeah I love the new transformation of Natsu.

You can't stop them from being apart Erza. What is the Second Son. Great chapter.

That's cold Erza to leave Lucy in the dark.

Hope, they can forgive each other.

Nooo, how can this happen.

Great chapter. Hurry you guys save Lucy before it's too late.

Ooh Natsu is jealous that's rare. Great chapter. Lucy is pregnant.

I have just read this chapter and the ones before, obviously, and have come to the conclusion... Lucy is such a dick towards Natsu. I don't know if it changes but damn she acts like everything is his fault so he is left super guilty when SHE GOT HERSELF INTO THIS MESS. I feel so bad for Natsu. Spoiler-he sacrifices himself to protect them and she acts like he just left her to pay child support with 40 kids, I mean in that moment when I was reading it I couldn't help but think about all the times he goes out of his way to help her... AND THIS IS HIS REWARD. Man, if I was Natsu I would be pissed. Rant over. Overall, I love the story. I like how Juvia is involved because she is usually left in the dark... Also DAMN!

Oh! Good to know! Thank you still for your hard work and writing this wonderful and vividly creative story! As I mentioned before it’s hard to find amazing writers like yourself! Keep your pen sharp!

You’re writing style is very vivid and detailed it’s hard to find amazing writers like yourself! Keep on writing!

¡Me ha encantado! Honestamente pensé que me aburriría rápidamente, pero cuando le dí click al fanfic, desde el primer capítulo empecé a emocionarme, y con otro capítulo más y más, tanto que terminé de leer tu historia en una noche. No sentí nada forzado, sobretodo la relación de Natsu y Lucy, por un tiempo he estado buscando una historia así, ¡y finalmente la he encontrado! Mi favorita sin duda alguna.

¡Besos desde Argentina!

Didn't future Lucy die in present Lucy's arms.

I really liked your story... until the baby. It honestly ruined the whole story for me. Not only is the baby not hers or Natsu's but it was created because of an evil man. I was going to add this story to my favorites but now I don't plan on reading it again.