No! It's amazing I love a happy ending! Yeah, it got a little cheesy here and there but it's absolutely amazing overall!

It probably helps that I freaking love Wheatley, but that's besides the point.

Holy fuck. That was amazing.

Hey fellow writer I thought I'd check out your stories and wow I really loved this. It was creepy and daek but also an amazing read! I love you insane! Wheatley

One of my favorite stories of all time.

The ending wasn't crappy! It was PERFECT for a story like this! I mean, who doesn't like a happy ending?
It was awesome, but at the same time made me cry. Wheatley, NO SUICIDAL ATTEMPTS THAT ARE. NOT. SO. MUCH. ON PURPOSE! xD

SO. FUCKIN. KAWII!

*writes this while crying*
I-I just love this so much I c-could just...*dies*

That was a bit weird, but quite original for a while there, I must say.

I love this story so much I the ending was so beautiful. Great job :-)