Reviews for -Be Mine? |
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![]() ![]() Any chance that you'll update again? |
![]() ![]() real tattoos for sure. place continue loved ur story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found your story and I'm liking it...BUT...Please please don't make Ana an obnoxious woman with a chip on her shoulder. You've made her an overachiever, a brilliant 22 yr old lawyer, a partner out of university, who is an awesome at ballet..a master at krav8, has a greater than thou attitude, and can beat up a man, and heaven forbid a man help her. And she has a huge chip on her shoulder and is rude. Please make her human and likeable...3 chapters in and I don't like her. I don't have a problem with a strong female character...But make her believable...f |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finish it! |
![]() ![]() I wish you'd finish it |
![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finish this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loving how this story is coming along cant wait to see how Ana/Christians relationship starts to grow. keep up with the great work. hope you will update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a very good writer |
![]() ![]() More, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon |
![]() ![]() plz update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice twist with the lawsuit & forced anger management. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I 3 Krav Ana! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, love it x |