You made be cry God dammit it's so sad

Oh my gosh! This was a very good short story, you made all the characters sound as if they were in my room right now! Keep up the good work!

So sad

Omg the emotions! :O

That is so sad! I love it! It pulled at my heart strings!

You need to work on your grammar and spelling, plus I found a critical error.

WHY THE HECK WOULD JAY'S DAD GIVE HIM A FREAKIN 9MM FOR HIS BIRTHDAY

other than that, good!

That was so Amazing!

I loved this so much! I'm gonna bookmark this and read it again.

Now you're making cry love the part when Kai imagined Jay and Nya dancing in the clouds I started to bawl