Reviews for Immortal High
Randomness chapter 4 . 5/14
This is a really good story, you should update it.
itachi.naruto47 chapter 4 . 2/21/2018
Hope to read more soon.
Crazy fan girl 1 chapter 4 . 11/22/2017
Update please
IvyThalassaLupin chapter 4 . 11/10/2015
Omg this is great!
Don't stop!
Can't wait till you update...
Nico's Mellarkable Runes chapter 4 . 10/10/2015
Update please update I'm too addicted to this story. Is Jace still going to have Heavenly Fire? How amazing would that be?!
arizona.green.tea.bae chapter 4 . 7/22/2015
I love this story you should continue
Zeryoana Zery chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
Great story! I love how u portrayed the characters and the plot line in general! But u haven't updated for a long time...
Guest chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
This story is amazing.
Keep it up!
Fangirl of all possible books chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
I know u haven't written in a while but could u do more? I love it!
xXMoonylightXx chapter 4 . 10/5/2014
This is such an ingenious idea! I skipped this story a couple of times while scrolling cause I thought it was a AU all the students are human and go to high school story but it's so much better cause they don't lose their individuality! Update soon!
Ree chapter 4 . 8/14/2014
Really good keep it up! I'm excited to read more
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2014
OMG! You need to update! I really need to know what happens next, so please update! And soon!
Scarlette-Moon-Howl chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
Next please! This seems to be one of the only good one so far! :D
Guest chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
Annabeth is actually a really good reader even with her dyslexia. Its just the other character, especially Percy, who has some problems reading. Also, in the books their ADHD doesn't make them that jittery, they can usually control it better, at least as far as we know. I'm not really sure Clarisse would have acted to violently towards Simon when he asked her to sit still. I mean she understands just how important this mission is, even if she acts like she doesn't. Would the shadowhunters be able to see the knife Clarisse had, since the "magic" is different? Simon isn't even a shadowhunter, so that situation with the knife involves him seeing it as well . I think you should address that in future chapters. Not to mention that if shadowhunters know and speak Latin then shouldn't they be able to tell that the demigods aren't speaking Latin? Magnus should be a little more careful with his disguise. Also, Have called Magnus by his first name, but the schools I've been to require students to call teachers by their last names, and when Jace said by the angel I don't see why he was so worried because there are many people who say things like that such as "dear lord", " oh my god\gods\goodness\gosh", "heavens above"' and the like, but Jace's reaction to what he said would have set off some alarm bells. Besides I think that if Have made a mistake like that he'd be more nonchalant about it and pretend that nothing happened. Percy's nickname was Seaweed Brain, not Kelp head, although I do like the new nickname. Anyways I get that this makes it sound as though I don't like your story, but that's not the case. With all authors there come mistakes or uncertain parts in a story, even with professional authors like Cassandra Clare and Rick Riordan, but that doesn't mean the story is horrible or anything. I, in fact, am loving your story, but I just wanted to point out some of the uncertain parts I noticed. You are not Cassandra Clare or Rick Riordan, so your perspective of the characters and how you write them is different, and that is perfectly fine; those were just some things that stood out a bit. I am truly enjoying your fan fiction. It makes me smile and I'm extremely excited to see what happens next! I wish that it was already done so I could just read it all in one sitting, but sadly I'll have to wait. You are such a great writer and I would be interested in reading more of your fanfictions. Good job, and I hope that my " suggestions" weren't offending or too rude, and that they in some way helped you.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I'm really enjoying this story so far! Crossovers just make me incredibly happy and excited! I would suggest that when a different character speaks or whenever a character speaks you start a new paragraph because it's confusing the way you have it. Also, I would love it if your chapters were longer. Make sure you don't forget for our characters to be numerous, that is if they are humerous, and I agree with one of the other commenters, I don't know who, when they said that since Simon is dead Nick should feel some sort of dead presence in the school. Sorry that is really long. . .I think that Simon or Clary would be the first to talk to CHB because their a bit nicer than the other shadowhunters, but anyways I really, really love reading this story and oh my gosh! Update faster I need to read more!
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