| Reviews for Snow |
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  Wow a flame sorry chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Ouch. Okay, I like the idea... and if I decoded everything from Valley-girl-speak it was quite good. The biggest problem that I had was that it was in valley-girl-speak. Kurama doesn't have valley-girl-speak. If he tried to use valley-girl-speak Hiei would kill him. Not getting into Hiei's verbal contributions. The thing about writing Kurama well (especially in first person) is that his vocabulary is naturally frequented by high language. Also, when one can run as fast as a car, one doesn't give a damn about finally being 18 and getting to drive. |
 Little Miss Midna chapter 1 . 2/13/2011 awwwww so cute 3 |
| drana0 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009 Uh, great story, too short maybe, I'd have yearned to read more. Nice little plot, good grammar :) Keep on writing |
| FerryGirlAyame chapter 1 . 3/18/2008 This is really well-written! |
| Sano chapter 1 . 3/13/2008 The sweetness almost killed me... Loved the fluff! :) |
| yllom21 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007 Cute little story. A bit mushy, but fluffy all the same. |
| LynLin chapter 1 . 2/10/2007 Too cute for words. ] |
| Anna Jaganshi chapter 1 . 12/9/2006 XD I like the "Hiei is ticklish" part, so CUTE! Kurama's way of telling this is funny, too. It has that humorous sarcasm that just makes me die laughing. .~ At least Shiori didn't freak-out when she saw them in bed... O.o That would have been VERY bad. Great one-shot! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories! |
| The Door is Closed chapter 1 . 10/1/2006 Beautiful. That was amazingly beautiful. |
| abcdzyxw chapter 1 . 6/17/2006 sweet hehe |
| aylinn chapter 1 . 3/21/2006 is it catcher in the rye? by J. ? your favorite book i mean. |
| Joanne chapter 1 . 12/26/2005 *SQUEALS* SWEETEST FIC EVER! I WORSHIP YOU OH GREAT ONE! XD AMAZING FIC. AND JUST SO FLUFFY I COULDN'T HELP BUT TEAR! I DON'T KNOW WHICH PART I LIKED WHETHER IT BE WHEN HIEI SAID "Kurama holds my soul in his hands" OR WHEN KURAMA SAID "Kaasan, everything I do, every movement of my muscles, every inhale of my lungs, every blink of my eyes, it's all for Hiei. I would have no reason to be here if not for him. For the feeling he gives me, I'd give my life" ! JUST DESCRIBED WHAT I FELT RIGHT NOW FOR MY OWN BEBE. ) AMAZING FIC. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER! YOU ARE MY NEW IDOL! WHOOT WHOO! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. XD |
| Swirly chapter 1 . 12/16/2005 Very interesting... and surprisingly humorous :P |
| Kitsune-Chan chapter 1 . 12/6/2005 Awsomeness...I really liked this fanfic...i laughed...boy did i laugh, but its also really nice to..thumbs up! |
| KiTSuNe-Ko JaGaNShi chapter 1 . 11/6/2005 I loved it! I really liked so frakin' much! i love yyh! I love this couple! kawai! Hope you still writting, you do it fine! yay! |
