Reviews for Polarity and Attraction
potstickers4lyfe chapter 13 . 4/7
;-; noooo! You can’t end with a permanent cliffhanger!
CottonKey chapter 13 . 10/22/2019
I really love how nuanced you made Taylor's new powers...really enjoyed how you describe her working at it to be good with them. I hope you decide to finish this one day!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/6/2019
This Danny is so much better than the Danny from another one of my favorite fics, Firebird. Hell, he’s better than canon; which, to be honest, isn’t hard to do. It’s still nice.
greendragonking002 chapter 13 . 9/15/2018
great fic. please write more
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2018
What a fucking place to stop writing.
MattKennedy chapter 13 . 6/19/2018
Cool story! :)
greyskyparadise chapter 12 . 4/8/2018
I really like this story, but I am quite frustrated with Danny. I feel like some fics make him completely impotent/basically furniture with no opinion or role, and then some stories insert him into every scene he can possibly be in. Maybe it's because I'm an adult, but if someone tried to undermine everything I'd done to save my family (especially when it seems like he didn't really do anything outside of plodding along with his dead end job, which seriously? He should have tried to find better paying work if he was really so concerned about losing the house!) I would lose my shit! In summary, I feel like Taylor has obviously made some less than ideal choices, but I feel like she has been acting as the head of the family and now Danny has decided he wants the role and is bulldozing her. Despite how rants this review ended up, I really like the world building of this story.
sonic chapter 13 . 3/6/2018
I liked the chapter!
Rawrking chapter 4 . 1/20/2018
Shit fic
DestinyVain chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
Hmmm polarity eh...
FreelanceBum chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Magneto?
Oww chapter 5 . 9/6/2017
Written well but honestly? I can't enjoy this story. You've spent too long on the locker without much resolution. It is quite honestly infuriating to see such a description of suffering without anything to show for it. Especially since it really isn't that unique in comparison to so many other fics that feel the need to rehash the locker. Great idea, great technical writing, incredibly disappointing plot.
Face Yourself chapter 4 . 9/6/2017
Author's note at the beginning wasn't really necessary (since it's obviously not canon timeline already - you stuck her in the locker in December before winter break, instead of in January after winter break like canon was), but it's always nice to confirm. XD
FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 8/26/2017
National Child Search Assistance Act of 1990 made it so there is no minimum time to report missing kids, Adam Walsch in 2006 made it so on top of that they also have to put it in the NCIC within 2 hours of getting a report.
Shadowpawzzz chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
awww good story.
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