Good work on this. I’m really enjoying it! Although it’s a shame you have t updated in quite some time. I hope to see another update for this. This story has really caught my attention!

Whoo! This is getting SOOOO good!

Hm! So there’s more to Dexné’s story? Hm!

Hmm...I sense some ripples! Ripples that just may affect the course of KH!

MY WORD! Insane chapter!

Wow. This chapter was just- wow! Good work.

Ooh boy. Dexné has apparently goofed. Not good.

Hm! Looks like this could be an opportunity for Dexné! She could have a bit of leverage against Axel if she "trains" Roxas! Intriguing...

Hmm...I’m thinking something REALLY bad DID happen back then with Lea and Isa. The only question is what? What memory is it that is so bad, she can’t recall?

Ha! Looks like Demyx won’t be getting out of those missions now!

Oh my. Things are SO not looking good.

And I believe I noticed something. Dexné mentioned that she had a physical heart when she was thinking, but isn’t she a Nobody? They don’t have Hearts until later on. I’m a bit confused.

Excellent work! Hm. Looks like jealousy is getting to Dexné. Speaking of, she’s quite an interesting character! Good job on that!

Ooh...Axel, Axel, Axel...what have you done?

Excellent chapter! I enjoyed it! Especially seeing as you put in Kopa, the son of Simba that wasn’t used in the second Lion King. Impressive! To be honest, I never knew about Kopa.

But I digress. Good work!

Confound it Demyx! Have you no shame?! Probably not. You ARE A Nobody. *sigh*

I wonder what mission Dexné received? And will she be reporting to Xemnas about Axel and Saïx’s treachery? She has reason enough to now.