This is absolutely not a bore! In fact, it's excellent! About a year or so ago, I saw an image of the Snow Queen and Idun swirling around the internet. I thought it was great, and it inspired me to come up with the idea that maybe Elsa was the product of the Snow Queen, Idun, and Agdar. I wasn't sure if there was a fan fiction that wrote about it (I read fan fic very little), but I loved the idea. My idea is somewhat similar to yours, with a shade of difference to it.

This is a wonderful short story with a very plausible explanation as to Elsa's powers. Wonderful job! Also, confidence in writing will come as you write more and more. Fan fiction is a great place to experiment with different styles of writing because it's not being published and it's something that people are sure to leave feedback on. I know a lot of fan fic writers help each other with grammar, punctuation, spelling, plot feedback, etc. As you write, you'll find your style. It took me a very long time to find mine: through fan fiction, I realized I was more comfortable with third-person and less comfy with first-person.

Good luck and good story! :D

Well, that explains why Elsa got ice powers. But i think its a gift that Elsa was born with the ice powers. Elsa learned how to control her powers with the help of her father the king and that Anna was safe from her when they kepted Elsa away from her.

I can't stand the idea portrayal of Elsa and Anna as orphaned sisters at all.

elsa and rupanzels age is the same

A charming, concise, cogent, complete explanation of how Elsa came to have her powers. Very, VERY different from the headcanon I used in my own explanation, but that is to be expected.

Your style is ... haunting. Familiar. Intimate. Above all, easy to read. And I deeply appreciate your attention to grammar and spelling. Thank you SO much for that.

Anna's character here is a nearly PERFECT extrapolation of the girl we came to love in the movie. Elsa's is understandable ... perhaps even more so than in canon. That much isolation would twist anyone.

Definitely worth a Favorite.

Awesome story!
And I love that you made Elsa and Rapunzel related in this story!

I found it likable.

OMG I LOVE IT! YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Nice touch on how Elsa could have got her powers!

that was petty good you should write more to this story, like a sense of the king and queen watching Elsa as she goes on we her life to the day of coronation to her make her ice palace, to returning home; and even if you don't it is still a good story.

Totally worth the time spent reading it.
You know a story is good when it gives you the chills.

"Tall, graceful, blonde-haired and blue-eyed, and skin so pale she could've been a ghost. She was the incarnation of Ice and Snow: Winter. "
Elsa herself, gives you the chills.

That's an interesting explanation for Elsa's powers. I like it

I Loved it! Found the link on Tumblr and had to read it! It was amazing

this is amazing! Are you aware that someone made fan art for this on tumblr?

That was perfect! Seriously. Thanks for the amazing reading. I'm sad for being so short... would you mind if I take this concept to write a backstory? Feel free to refuse.