Reviews for Malediction
aliealouise chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
Brilliant story well done x
Kotori-Sensei chapter 11 . 2/23/2015
T-T
Is over, and it was beautifull!
Thank you!
PS: i totally forgot this was in our universe...i mean, modern time. I keep on thinking about the original movie...Medieval castles and all that...hahahaha
Kotori-Sensei chapter 9 . 2/23/2015
Janine! really?! Seriously? JANINE?!
XDXDDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
Kotori-Sensei chapter 7 . 2/23/2015
Bill is Mary's brother?!
(Or more like: Mary is Bill's sister?!)
Kotori-Sensei chapter 6 . 2/23/2015
One of the things i love the most about this one fic, is that is from Bill's point of view...is...different :)
Mary as a cat...hahahhahahha!
Guest chapter 11 . 2/15/2015
Fantastic story! I love it, so sweet and sad and such an emotional journey for everyone! Thank you so much for all your l
JRLink chapter 11 . 2/16/2015
In a way I am almost sad that this was the last chapter... But this was good and I really enjoyed reading this, it is one of my favourite stories. Thank you for this wonderful story! See you in another story
Sendai chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
Oh my...that was such a beautiful ending. The two becoming one. Just wonderful. This is a masterpiece and I love thus story dearly. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Ennui Enigma chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
An epic epilogue! Perfect reading on Valentine's day too I suppose :p
I like how you've captured the essence of any true epic story... that of adversity and hardship being overcome in the end. Your ending sentence is poetic and ensnares that kernel of truth - every person longs for such epic-ness in their own hearts. May not admit such... but, why else does humanity flock to see and read such adventures? Well done!

"I'm not saying I want to go back to that and, ..., I'm not going to throw the experience away." - well put. I can understand that sentiment quite well!

..."You are my sun and stars. You are the moon and the east wind. You are the cause and effect, the pull of the tides on the moon and the inexorable pull of gravity. You are the one who changed me. Shaking, he moaned, "You are mine and I am yours." - can almost hear that deep baritone myself as you pen these words. Excellent.

"Through adversity, struggle and heartbreak, they had become something unbreakable. Their spirits might be a little tarnished but the fire had never completely destroyed them; it had only forged them, transmuted into something stronger." - perfect wrap up and summary!
Ennui Enigma chapter 10 . 2/14/2015
"cold as the ninth level of hell, dark and deep, holding infinite secrets and the key to the world's ending. Wiggins shivered" - love the analogy, creative and effective!

"Sherlock answered by pulling John into a kiss once more, broken only by Lestrade appearing at the door. "Did we miss anything?"" -haha! perfect theatrical timing on Lestrade's part :)

Great ending comment and expression at the end... nicely placed smidgeon of humour in the midst of some tragedy and goodbye.
SailOnSilvergirl chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
Aww. We knew they'd make it! I am always amazed at how you integrate our beloved boys into your AUs, especially one based on a film. So well done!
Junejuly15 chapter 10 . 2/12/2015
What a fierce ending! And now I can't wait for the epilogue *wink wink* :) JJ xx
mrspencil chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
And all is well
mrspencil chapter 10 . 2/14/2015
Very very well done:-)
EJBRUSH1952 chapter 11 . 2/13/2015
Could feel the rightness of it all through your words. Thank you for telling their story.
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