i just thought that by letting in necvike on his humble abode wich is the slytherin common room , neville will have a chance to decieve the new dark lord

Ok, reached my limit at the second chapter. Harry (Hadrian) is not dark but just another edgy child trying to sound like an adult.

I like the story but something feels off. Even I don't know what. I get a feeling and it's just...off.

I both love and absolutely hate the ending. Keep writing!

Honestly you haven’t done a particularly good job with creating harry. He’s already acting like he’s the top dog and untouchable. I can’t see his character growing cause he’s already finished really. My real issue is that harry is well about as deep as a Pisces of paper. There’s no complexity or sophistication in his character he’s just dark cold and evil for the sake of being dark cold and evil.

This? This was straight up AMAZING!

Nunca mais leio uma história sua

ooOoOoH! Exciting! I'm loving it so far!

bad forum doing a flashback with your own story to get a higher word count in your storyI wouldn't of said anything but using the story title for every scene break, having just disclaimer see first chapter and have the plot in every chapter just incase we the reader forget,, surprisingly you don't have the the questions to go with the review answers not only you get the extra word count, the other readers have no idea what your talking about unless they go through all of the comments or PM's that we don't see because well their PM's) but I'll keep on reading because you do have a good story, just have to do a bit of skipping... unless I see another flashback with in your own story again...( sorry)

Yeah I can't continue, this story would put you in high esteem at the gathering of the edgelords.

Only a Sith deals in absolutes. Nice Revenge of the Sith Reference.

Have you heard the story of Darth Plagueis the Wise?

Mark of cain? Lol that would be hilarious

Tmr ? She does call him little master

Voldemort is his ''father'' Right?