This is really good! Please continue!

...he isn't a convict. A convict has to have had a TRIAL.

I love this story! :) Is there a sequel or something? I'd love to read more!

More! Add Severus Snape please!

Your Harry is written as arrogant DICK, who has no problems endangering others, and cares little for the health and safety or FEELINGS of anyone else! Seriously, a complete BRAT. WORSE than Draco was in the 1st book. There's no excuse for his behavior.

Draco is fucking 11! Why the HELL should he have to offer ANYTHING in exchange for safety from a family member or ANYONE?! Seriously, that's worse than what Dumbledore does!

Wow, your Harry is a complete dick. I guess he doesn't want to make any friends.

updat eplease

Ah, this is cool! Please continue! Luv Tonks

just read the story- loved it! Update soon please?!

Katie, Neville, Luna and Cedric. Nice group of friends when you add Ingrid in.

I like the premise of this. The story is well written and original.

My only real (but minor in the long run) issue is that Hermione has been left as 'questionable' when she was the one person who never betrayed Harry.

One thing I've noticed though...you made sure to point out earlier in the story that no one can find out Harry is anything more than a Black, yet Snape called him Potter in front of an entire potions class. There were a couple other instances where someone called him Potter as well. I suppose it could have been on purpose but it's just not conducive to keeping it a secret that he's a Potter.

Anyway, hope to see more soon.

C

I hope this story continues, it is very good. I also hope Harry and Ginny are together in it.

even if Tonks managed to obliviate Dumbledore there's still all those portraits in his office who could tell him what happened.

if Sirius was never arrested how can he be a former prisoner on Azkaban?