nooo ooooh why not Momoi

I LOVE IT

Need more Author chan

The characters are a bit OOC, but in general the story was good :3 The plot was nice and Kuroko and Murasakibara were sooo cute *-* And when the later asked Kuroko to call him Atsushi, I was like "OMG so adorably sweet!" So yeah, as you can see, I enjoyed the story x)
Take care!
Kissuuuuuuus

Aweee!

This is so cute! Great job! ;D Mura x Kuroko is so kawaiiiii! :3

I find ironic that so many of your reviews look like this:

this ws a rly gr8t stry but i think ur grmmer neds sum werk

... Don't worry about those. ;)

Oh my gosh I L-O-V-E it!

You have a great story line and i have been looking for a story like this, so thank you. Here are some helpful tips: try not to jump around so much it makes it hard to read and spell check is important too. Don't stop writing cause your really good.

oh?

so ur writing is a little immature UR not putting in any character details for excample midorima should say oha Asa predicted bad luck
And u should fix ur grammar :3

Try fixing your grammar and spelling.

For your information,a ling update doen't hurt.! To be honest,your story was crappy at first,but your writting improved. Just watch out for typos,ok?

I don't know if you wanted to write something like...a childs' story?
There is no plot and is awfully written.

Write it again, keep trying.

Interesting story ! That HIM is definitely Mura
Please could you put spaces between the paragraph that would definitely make the reading more easy.
Good Luck!

owhhh its a good start ! i love it

can you add some space like paragraph it will be easy to read.

tq for your hard work
till next time