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Enjoyed the story author-san. Even though akashi can be overbearing( buuut it won't be him if it's otherwise) and 'flirting' is the first thought he get when nori is happily interacting with someone else. Read this in one go.

already yaoi you write and akashi is not homosexual that I know (respect the character and stop wanting to satiate your dirty inclinations by writing about heterosexual characters) then it's a cliché Nori type has no character it looks like a female instead of tiring you to make it so feminine made into a girl simply knowing that akashi loves worthy girls (and never boys) comforting thing for you many people love yaoi but what you do n is not really original knowing that the rules of the FanFiction suggest to keep the character in the canon you make akashi pd gold it is not you mess the art of fanfiction with this kind of bullshit in the end even the scenario of the story loses in development since the goal is reached from the beginning it is ridiculous to do yaoi with a heterosexual character.

YESSSS!This story is so good!I love it!I'm so happy for them!

Ummm... am I the only one who saw this?
Nori means seaweed...and Akashi hates seaweed. Is this an intentional pun?

Omg, I couldn’t stop giggling when Nori’s granny just walked in on them

Amazon has a little sister? I REALLY DID NOT know that!

Usually I don't like oc's. You know the Mary Sue type, perfect in everything they do...but stories like this I do like. It's cute, and really hard to come by; I've only read one other male oc insert fic that was part of the main yaoi pairing. Good on you for standing apart and writing in a BL leaning shoujo fashion.

Did anyone else see the hickey or did they just cover it up again?

Please stop adding ANs in the middle of the story, it distracts from the reading. I'm sure it's helpful to have the definition of some romaji you like to put in there, but you could've just added the definitions to the bottom of the page.

This fanfic was amazing. I loved every single part of it. Don't worry about the English: it's brilliant! I'm not this good in my second language! I started watching KnB in March and I finished it early this month. Since then, I have been reading fanfics and yours is amazing! I feel like crying now at the amazing ending. I love how you wrapped it up and... aw man, I'm really crying now. Please please email me at if you're writing another fanfic. Akashi in this one is just so... amazing and the way you put him is amazing. When I read this, I don't get why people say reading on Wattpad is better because this is awesome. Thank you so very much for writing this.
Yours,
Shinpi-tekina

In the picture on the cover are the glasses the cracked one's or the new ones?

*Screams* the ship is happening. it's happening. Yas. Many thank.

I'm really impressed by this story so far! Especially the OC. He's developed really nicely and feels like he could actually be a character in the canon anime.

Oh no, he dead. RIP.