Reviews for My unknown desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping you will continue your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad that this story was abandoned :( It's very well written, it has a beautiful plot ... I really wanted it to continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I has so enjoyed reading your story, I hope you will feel inspired to finish it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, you have given me a way to escape the horrid everyday world around me. Again thanks, TPS |
![]() ![]() Bella sure got over the sister thing pretty fast...TOO FAST! |
![]() ![]() All his life? what a weird comment...how long could he have been sexually active? 10-13 years? that's not ALL your life...but why doesn't bella ask him how many? What is his number? I cant believe bella hasn't asked. Doesn't she want to know where her husband has been? besides tanwhore and her SISTER? |
![]() ![]() Bella never acts like I think she should. After knowing that hes in love with her sister...and now knowing that he was fucking tanwhore...shouldn't bella say what a normal girl would say in that situation? "I want a divorce Edward, I don't want to be married to a WHORE" |
![]() ![]() Bellas a fucking moron! I want to believe and trust my husband...I don't know what is holding me back! Um...it might be that he still loves your SISTER...you don't get over love in a fucking week. Edward can say all the bullshit he wants but its all fucking lies...hes in love with bellas sister, his heart is broken, please tell me how that isn't involved in their marriage? |
![]() ![]() Bellas so desparate that she doesn't even care that Edward has spent the last two months with her SISTER! Bella is so fucking annoying, how about acting like a real person? She shouldn't even want to touch that manwhore! |
![]() ![]() so heres the thing...bella can NEVER really be with Edward...Edward was with her FUCKING SISTER! NO THANKS |
![]() ![]() This is a really lovely story. Would have loved a ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it. awesome story.. please continue please please |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update. please please pleaseeeeee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love an update lol, I was really getting into this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() will this story ever be continued? |