Loved your story. I thought it was amazing and you captured the characters perfectly.

WHat a selfish BITCH! Felicity is!

I don't think to much of your version of Felicity and she deserves all the yelling and then some for what she did.

UNREALISTIC! There's no way in the world that any guy would be OK with being lied to like that and let her get away with just saying sorry and that's the end of it, considering what she almost let happen.

I'm sorry but this story is starting to get stupid and way unrealistic even for a story of fiction, not to mention your version of Felicity seems to be a selfish moron.

It's the last thing she wants to do she says but she's going to go right out and do it anyway, if I was Ollie and I found out about this there would be hell to pay for Felicity. I mean if anything else how would Ollie ever be able to trust her again.

If I was Ollie I would of turned around and shot Diggle in the neck with an arrow for puting his 2 cents in.

i like your writing style :-D

Aww loved it. Très Bon !

awaaaa. how sweet to nae the baby shado. awa. so cute. I cant wait til fight for family is translated.

Beautifully written:)

muy bueno y ek final sobervio

Beautiful :)

AWESOME

Aaahhh felcity had contractions and didnt tell him cant wait to see what happens next