Cliffhanger!

A great start!

I love the suspense! Going to go read the sequel now.

I loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel!:)

This is an amazing story and I'm definitely going to read the sequel.

A cliffhanger ending...
FALSE.
A cliffFALLER ending.
Trollolololololoollol

Ah...this chapter is a little...disappointing.

I was really impressed with the first eight. Very in character, very pre-series-esque. There were technical errors - like capitalizing "blacksmith" so often and not capitalizing "Viking" (a people - a race: capitalized the same way we capitalize "American" or "English"), capitalizing the "says" or "asks," and referring to the characters - especially Hiccup - by physical attributes, such as his freckles or hair, which is just a little amateur. Introducing Gobber and Stoick as if the readers don't know him but not Hiccup and Toothless? Inconsistent. But on the whole, it was very enjoyable to read. Toothless is particularly IC, and some of your imagery is breathtaking.

But this last chapter? Oh, so, so disappointing. The pre-series era of better fanfiction ends here with the appearance of Alvin. It's a vicious blizzard - why is Alvin out sailing in the lovely weather? How could he possibly have located the two? Alvin doesn't have an armada (which is a Spanish word; I don't know why the show keeps screwing with that); he has only a few ships (which the kids decrease with just about every episode) and a limited amount of men (Outcasts are obtained for the tribe by being banished from the other tribes - and we don't see any Outcast women.) With this new plotline, you negate all the skill you wrote with earlier, creating a clichéd, countlessly overdone story - and I haven't even read it yet. You end the scene with "Next stop, Outcast Island," which was used at least once in the show *itself.*

I do realize it's too late to "fix" this, but I waited until the last chapter to give my review. Excellent in some - most - ways, but very frustrating in others.

I'm going to KILL you and your stupid cliffhangers! Well, not YOU, because then you couldn't write ant more of these AMAZING stories! I've read all of your HTTYD fics, and PLEASE keep writing, you're awesome, and post Fire soon!

And this is why I keep coming back! Your stories are capital 'A' Amazing! Can't wait for Fire, will be checking up whenever I can
Do you have any more How To Train Your Dragon series planned after this? Because il be the first one reading them!

Great job!

Omg that. Was. A-mazing!

Ahhh! Cliffhanger! D: I can't wait for the next story!

Nnnnnnnoooooooooo! T-T Stupid Alvin.

Kumquat? Funny word.
:)

I'm speechless...I can't wait for Fire, I'm so excited to see what happens. xD I hope Stoick quickly realizes that Hiccup and Toothless haven't left, but were kidnapped.