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Shit pure shit garbage trash

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Another fantastic story. I hope you do write more on this though!

Loved the story even if it is all over the place at time, but I got to say if you listen to Clannad song of "snow field" when Naruto is starting to lose his memories and even towards the ending it will really make you cry. Hope to see more in the future

Yeah you honestly ruined the story when he regained his memories temporarily. Like what the hell, he wasn’t even telling her anything and just saying non sense it was actually annoying. What’s the point if he’s going to lose them again honestly dragging this whole thing out

Dude is taking mad long to remember . It’s like you’re dragging it out and since it’s a short story I can only imagine him remember in the last 2 chapters. That’ll be a big let down . Former naruto meeting his old home and ancestors and falling in love with Mito would have been interesting but this mystery crap was just annoying since we all know who he is and you barely have him remember relevant stuff . Why do we care he remembers a place where the roads live like the only thing he remembers is that he’s from Konoha and likes ramen. During his time training you’d actually expect him to get the water walking and tree walking down REALLLYYY easy because he has done it a bunch of times that it’s like second nature to him or it’s like breathing . That’s why I don’t understand why he was sucking at those exercises when he should have easily done it or shouldn’t haven forgotten it. Like how he knows how to walk he should know how to water walk since he’s been doing it for so long if you understand what I mean just like how after a spar with Mito he was able to beat her and he was able to understand his fathers jutsu. It’s just this memory loss crap is getting so boring since it’s a short story . I wouldn’t mind as much if it was longer cause we could read more on how he interacts with his memories but it’s like 8 chapters and 3/4 of the story is him trying to figure out who he is and barely finding out either cause when he does remember something it’s basically irrelevant

Really enjoyed this story. I could definitely see what you mean by the first couple of chapters and how you didn’t really have a plan but I still think you did a great job bringing the chapters and ideas together.

Really interesting so far

you have the word I'm in places where AM should be multiple times

I don't know if you meant Predictable but you misspelled it

Fue maravilloso, aunque el epilogo hubiera estado bien...en fin igual y queda el final abierto.

Me doy cuenta de que esta es una historia muy profunda y que para comprender la relación de naruto y mito tienes que prestar atención a toda ka historia y captar su sutileza de romanticismo.

Gracias y espero mas historias así.

Naruto x mito

... imma need that epilogue

sigue la hisyoria porfavor me quede confuso con el final