You're killing me. The humor and subtle intimacy of interactions literally causes interruptions to my breathing. This is my third story by you and contrary to normally sucking all further decent content by someone into a black hole of binge reading, it's so good, that I am rationing your stories out to better appreciate them amongst the mediocrity.

Thank you for writing this. I was most impressed that you were able to keep me guessing Loki's motives up till their reveal. I was so certain that his goal was to break her, and all of them, or shape her until she would be on his side and mostly ok with him screwing with the others until he grew bored and kicked them out. That this turned into a 'redemption by proxy' of sorts was a pleasant surprise. Bravo! And again, thank you.

So beautiful and exactly 73,000 words lol
Here's to wishing they had a permanent happy ending

Wonderful seductive fanfic that show differ side of loki and prove he will be good king. Black frost was appealing

that escalated quickly

Hey thanks for sharing this BRILLIANT story! It'd be AWESOME if you could write a SEQUEL as well to this, illustrating more further development of the relationship between Natasha and Loki, while they face conflicts such as Natasha returning to Midgard, etc. and after all they've been through, they realise their love for each other and Loki makes Natasha his queen? Wow I'd love to read a FULL LENGTH SEQUEL to this, there's so many ways you could go about exploring what happens after this! Or if writing a proper SEQUEL takes too much time, as I'm sure you're probably very busy, could you please at least add an EPILOGUE where Loki is still the king of Asgard and Natasha is his queen, where you could also tie up some other loose ends and there's some more Loki Natasha interaction! So please PLEASE Please it would be ABSOLUTELY AMAZING if you wrote an EPILOGUE or even better a FULL LENGTH SEQUEL, and I'm really looking forward to reading it! ;)

"Unfortunately for him, she likes to start her day with a bath, knowing full well that he will never get up early enough to catch her, because it is the king's privilege to sleep until late and breakfast when he pleases."

Hmmm... And here I thought what Natasha was old enough to know that it's only in fairy tales kings do nothing apart from swimming in prosperity and produce heirs.

Why it seems to me that Loki in his doomed fatalism, didn't put all the effort. Exit into battle without proper armor, and so casually fight ... as if he expected to die.

i love it i love your style of writing

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