I really like your depiction of Blake and Yang and their interaction together, it's believable and realistic. I'm glad that you may be continuing this storyline, can't wait to read more. Good job!

For a first fic, you did spectacularly. Your characterization was very very on-point. At no point did I scratch my head and think "this seems OOC". And I just loved how... I don't know, subtle it was? The bond between Yang and Blake didn't need a lot of superficiality. It was just sort of there, and neither of them needed to give a name to it.

Probably one of my favorite fics I've read thus far with these two, and believe me when I say I've been reading a lot of them!

This is really great and I just love it! Is there a second part to this because, oh god, this is absolute perfection. Hands down.

This was a lovely read. I very much enjoyed it. :)

This is sweet.. Makes me wanna go aww. I see potential to develop this into a longer story,but that's just a suggestion. Looking forward for more Black Gold )

That was A nice one