awesome! when will you post another.

This is unbelievably shitty. Like oml bro how is your writing this bad?

Kinda cringe and cliche

I'm at chapter 12 and some things are confusing me. I thought the camp councillors and 'the seven' were partial immortals, so why did he fade instead of just dying? Also Annabeth keeps stating that she has made a mistake regarding her relationship with Percy, but she still sticks with Orion/Theseus. Lastly, did Orion change his name to Theseus? Because I feel like Theseus has replaced Orion as Annabeth's boyfriend, which is only possible if he did change his name, or if Poseidon had another child who became immortal, as he faded instead of died and it is stated that Percy held his 'brother'.

Please update this! It is so good!

I absolutely love this fanfiction! Please continue!

there no perzoe at all!

you lied to me

freaking hell! Why did you do that!?

Perzoë and Pereyna are my totes OTPs.

.HADEEEEEEEESSSSSS!(Sorry, Hades.)

No offence, or anything. As I've said before, I love your work. But that's a little OOC of Sally-she loves Percy. Like a lot. Sure, she loves Andromeda, too(who was, by the way, in the original myths, that princess that PERSEUS saved.), but do you really think that she would toss aside one child-who she has always been with-for another? Just saying. other than that, love your work!xx :)

loves ur work! You're probably never going to read this, as this book is so old, and this is one of the first chapters, but I just want to say that you're doing a great job on writing this! 2nd time reading!Love it! :)

i cant believe u, how could u just end it like that, its so good, update!

WOW, I love this chapter

Type your review here. this story is so f*cking good