Reviews for Lucky Seven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Adorable ending that made me squeal, and a very honest build up to the final giving-in to comfort. THanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great little twist at the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I love this fic. I love how you've captured poor Jude feeling sick and lonely and hopeless and abandoned and afraid to trust. And Stef and Lena are just off the. Absolutely perfect. Thanks for a great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another heartfelt and emotional story. You are excellent at capturing the characters emotions and feelings. |
![]() ![]() I cant believe i never read this one! #fakefan Its amazing and i think very realistic because even though jude was already pretty comfortable there, he's sick and feeling extremely guilty. As usual your writing is fantastic and i look forward to reading more from you! |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me cry. No big deal… :P 3 I loved this a lot and yes. :) xx Sage |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty story! It's seems ended, but don't put that it's complete |
![]() ![]() ![]() that last line. jeepers maan i had chills! great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...what a sweet ending! I'm glad Stef got a chance to bond with Jude, and that he finally got all of his worries off of his chest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your voices for Stef and Lena are right on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness - Jude's catalogue of foster homes One through Six was killing me. So sad, but it makes so much sense! Poor baby. I love the way you've set up the story and his anxiety - you've got some really strong and vivid descriptions. I'm looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a lovely story. I enjoyed seeing Jude's progression towards letting himself be sick and vulnerable around his moms. I liked that you had his overwhelming need to be comforted overrule his distrust of Lena and Stef's kindness. Jude's a wise soul, but he's still just a little guy and it was nice to see the comfort that Lena and Stef brought him and the joy it brought to them to help him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story |