| Reviews for The Rebirth |
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   Pink ranger 13 chapter 4 . 3/29 It’s a great story |
| Borello chapter 4 . 11/15/2018 come on. i want read more chapter. |
| Herry chapter 4 . 7/24/2018 to short needs to be longer |
| my 2 guys chapter 4 . 2/13/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| angelsakurat2 chapter 2 . 3/11/2015 i think mikoto is another good choice to the harem |
| jh831 chapter 4 . 11/23/2014 its good, but GO BACK AND PUT SPACES BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS, its like reading one big wall of text and i kept loosing my spot. it was good, but spaces would help out alot |
| Madgormley chapter 4 . 8/27/2014 great story so far please continue |
| The Sith'ari chapter 4 . 4/2/2014 Will you a Mikoto to the harem? |
| mattcun chapter 4 . 3/8/2014 plz write more |
| Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 4 . 2/25/2014 The chapter was too hard to read, because it was all bunched up! Could you please spread the sentence apart? |
| snake1980 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 not bad for chapter 4 but it was hard to read. u need to space it out a bit. other then that it good. |
| nemikconi new sora chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 can you update soon and make the nex chapter longer |
| Lord Niralath Lothiel chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 Good chapter. But lots of grammatical errors. Also very hard to read confusing. Also mitiko is wrong its Mikoto. I would recommend that you get a beta reader to re-read this and update and recheck. |
| Samnamikaze23 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 Awesome! |
| Zenko13 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 Its not kasen, its kaa-san |
