I hope you are going to write more updates soon please update soon thanks

plz update! have Legolas be more of a farther

Why was Frodo at the meeting if he didn't have the ring?

Good story, but you need to be more careful with your spelling. You also keep writing my when it should be me. You have Chloe and Elise talking about their world and no one reacts to it. I don't see Legolas falling in love with a child either. It can be a good story without them acting like stupid love struck teenagers.

Pls update :-D

This may be good. But you made the Canon Ooc. (Out of character). I mean, completely out of character.

The Elvish is from what. Yeah, this website doesn't let you put in other websites or email addresses. Cause they are a bunch of meanies

One that with the ending. DAAAAAAMN. Wow. That was funny. This could use more detail. But other then that it's fine.

Really enjoyed this chapter and the fanfic please update soon thanks

This is hilarious keep going

If you spaced this out then it might be more enjoyable. Sorry I dont meant to be harsh, it is just difficult to keep track of who's talking.

got some funny thing it good work love it keep up the good work :)

Dem spelling mistakes doe, am I right? Will proofread next time methinks

Awaiting updates!

Not funny anymore ...
Borys