Reviews for Brooklands at Brecon Beacons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ooo, continue! Have K units students find out who Cub is...that would be interesting. :) I love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, I'm terrible with ideas but I just want to say your writing is amazing and you should keep going, there aren't enough fanfics out there so keep It going |
![]() ![]() Omg! When you first mentioned a place that's part of MI5 where kids get trained to be spies, I was like 'Could it be? Nah, it's not a crossover'. And then you mentioned Zara, and I was like, 'this can't be a coincidence'. And then Joshua, and I was like 'Omg, yes!'. And then with the red shirt, and black shirt, and Lauren, and that just did it for me. I was literally jumping up and down at all those Cherub references! Anyway, sorry for the rant. All in all, this is a really great and interesting story and I really hope you continue/finish it! (Even if you haven't updated in over two years... ): ) Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please please update soon! You are killing me with this wait! I love how it is so full of humour and fun! I liked the part when Alex was improving the kids' skills/giving them advice. The padawan part was really funny. For the hand to hand, I think that Cub should dole out advise alot, perhaps in a rambling fashion, so that a lot of people are confused, and Cub has to repeat the whole thing again. I know you haven't updated in a long time, but please do. This is one of the best stories I have read, the only thing it needs is to have more chapters and be complete! I think the class should find out that Cub is, in fact, Alex from Brookland. I love a good school reveal! Also, maybe Cub could meet up with someone like Smithers. Gadgets are always fun! If you want more ideas, you can PM me. (Preferably with specific questions.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this is just great! Please update sometime :) |
![]() ![]() laughing so much when reading this please carry on! would love to know more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great laugh! Updates Please! |
![]() ![]() carry one please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! Have his group figure it out! It's a great twist! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story, i would love to read more :D |
![]() ![]() Really really good! I think the whole class should recognise Alex; like Elbob jonny I would love to hear Alex stutter his story about spying. Maybe he could tell the truth though and K- unit could see some teenage tantrums [hint! hint!]. Still an amazing story though with an amazing plot. Well done. JUST PLEASE CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh... Ben and Alex bickering like siblings, that is so fun to picture |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you please update this story. I want to know what happens in the next ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Please update soon:) I think that you should have somebody reconise Alex, I'd love to see him try and explain why he's there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting! I hope for more! |