Reviews for Brooklands at Brecon Beacons
Ava Simbelmyne chapter 3 . 4/13/2017
ooo, continue! Have K units students find out who Cub is...that would be interesting. :) I love your stories!
Em0Wolf chapter 3 . 1/29/2017
Sorry, I'm terrible with ideas but I just want to say your writing is amazing and you should keep going, there aren't enough fanfics out there so keep It going
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14/2016
Omg! When you first mentioned a place that's part of MI5 where kids get trained to be spies, I was like 'Could it be? Nah, it's not a crossover'. And then you mentioned Zara, and I was like, 'this can't be a coincidence'. And then Joshua, and I was like 'Omg, yes!'. And then with the red shirt, and black shirt, and Lauren, and that just did it for me. I was literally jumping up and down at all those Cherub references!
Anyway, sorry for the rant. All in all, this is a really great and interesting story and I really hope you continue/finish it! (Even if you haven't updated in over two years... ): )
Keep writing!
Vanadesse Sadroniel chapter 3 . 3/3/2016
Please, please please update soon! You are killing me with this wait! I love how it is so full of humour and fun! I liked the part when Alex was improving the kids' skills/giving them advice. The padawan part was really funny. For the hand to hand, I think that Cub should dole out advise alot, perhaps in a rambling fashion, so that a lot of people are confused, and Cub has to repeat the whole thing again. I know you haven't updated in a long time, but please do. This is one of the best stories I have read, the only thing it needs is to have more chapters and be complete! I think the class should find out that Cub is, in fact, Alex from Brookland. I love a good school reveal! Also, maybe Cub could meet up with someone like Smithers. Gadgets are always fun! If you want more ideas, you can PM me. (Preferably with specific questions.)
dorfchaosgenie chapter 3 . 1/20/2016
Omg this is just great! Please update sometime :)
Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
laughing so much when reading this please carry on! would love to know more!
Vivianne95 chapter 3 . 10/28/2014
Great laugh!
Updates Please!
alexriderfan2014 chapter 3 . 10/21/2014
carry one please!
Chise Sakamoto chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Cool! Have his group figure it out! It's a great twist!
IfINeverKnew chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
this is a great story, i would love to read more :D
IwantMore chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
Really really good! I think the whole class should recognise Alex; like Elbob jonny I would love to hear Alex stutter his story about spying. Maybe he could tell the truth though and K- unit could see some teenage tantrums [hint! hint!]. Still an amazing story though with an amazing plot. Well done. JUST PLEASE CONTINUE!
GladToBeAbnormal chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
Heh... Ben and Alex bickering like siblings, that is so fun to picture
agent potter chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Can you please update this story. I want to know what happens in the next !
Crashing Way chapter 3 . 4/11/2014
I love it! Please update soon:) I think that you should have somebody reconise Alex, I'd love to see him try and explain why he's there.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 3 . 4/9/2014
This is really interesting! I hope for more!
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