Gosh her parents are so foolish and trusting in theier that they don't think of the consequencies. Elsa will feel that Jack abandonned her.

I... I can't... *sobs* Even though I write sad stories myself, I'm not immune to them, apparently.

How could you just leave it off like that last chapter, then just end it like this? You evil, evil, genius. I'm holding in tears!

This was a beautiful story. Simply beautiful. Read through the whole thing in one sitting. This, I will definitely be reading over and over again. Amazing job!

it was beautiful! I barely cry :'D ... Your way of writting is remarkable!

Omg how couldddd you TTTT
Such a wondrous story then bam! Sad ending ): Will u compensate me for the tissues i spent

Sheesh... But seriously though, awesome story, so touching and sweet and fluffy. Please write more :3

This so beautiful...It literally made me cry.

A handprint on the window
It was the first of him she did see
She looked down at the blue bound book and knew
There was only one person that it could be

A handprint on the window
She knew that he was back
He taught and played with her
Her beautiful Winter Jack

A handprint on the window
A palace made of snow
The blue bound book on the icy floor
Oh how the wind does blow

A handprint on the window
A single perfect night
With rings around their fingers
And their eyes blazing bright

A handprint on the window
The story again being told
A beautiful sweet kiss
His memories are gone, her body is cold

A handprint on the window
He holds the tube bearing her mark
He remembers, sees her and cries
Because of her handprint on his heart...

Thank you...

Wow.

This was beautiful! I was about to exit my tab after I read the ending but I just HAD to review this and complement the great ideas!

Firstly because you mixed the storyline together, you did little alterations to the actual movie storyline while adding little bits of your own. I also think that was right, I mean Jack could have met Elsa during his 100th year of invisible existence, right?

Second, I praise you for your awesome narration! I've read a lot of thrid person stories and most of the time there's usually something wrong with their descriptions and actions, sometimes they just don't describe it well enough for me to imagine it. (You understand what I just typed? Great, cuz I didn't.)

Finally, I love the ENDING! The last chapter was AMAZING and MIND BLOWING and NERVE WRECKING and HEART BREAKING and sweet. You may not have noticed it, but you've used so much material objects to make it more sentimental. You can just imagine the flow of time through those object like the book, how it gets worn over time of Elsa reading it; and the immortality of love through their ice rings. Keep using that because readers can understand time better when objects start to depreciate and stuff, it's not just objects, like your description of Elsa turning old. Which by the way, you have to work on your description of characters. I couldn't imagine the two children right with just the hair color and eyes, I wasn't also able to imagine old Elsa properly. But all in all...
This is the BEST JELSA FanFiction I've read so far and I can't believe you major in music! Dude you should have made your own books!

Well, yeah. I liked the way you twisted the last part, I'll be dreaming about this fic in my sleep ;D!

Keep writing, May the inspiration flow!

this is so sad, but it is so beautiful

Not even Titanic made me cry this hard...

Beautiful story though...(goes off to cry more)

D'X

This was beautiful, sadly beautiful. I enjoyed this, so much. :3

Bravo! Simply stunning! Amazing ending it was just...wow. Speechless.

THIS MADE ME CRY
INCREDIBLY SAD STORY

Thank you

Okay, I didn't cry at Harry Potter. I don't think I have ever cried at a book, and if I have, it is a VERY rare occurrence, even when my FAVORITE characters were dying. But THIS is the cruelest, most heartbreaking thing I have ever read and I am right on the brink of MAJOR waterworks. Why do you hate me!? I love and hate this at the same time!

Beautiful story though, I loved how in the other chapter you sorta made us guess whether it was Anna or Elsa's wedding for a while. I was so frustrated at that part lol. So good :)... but I still hate you for making me almost cry.

I cried so hard while reading this.. And it takes a lot for me to cry so that's something! This is such a nice story! I loved it!