The fic would be better if the pairing was Menma x Sasuke, or to make a NaruSasu pairing, if you switched Menma and Naruto so that Naruto and Sasuke were best friends and Menma was the new arrival.

The plot is kind of boring the way it is. Naruto and Sasuke have instant lust the moment they see each other and practically had sex the same day. Where's the conflict? A couple that has such an easy time of it is boring.

The only conflict in the story is that Menma doesn't like the idea of the two of them together and wants to cockblock. It's obvious he's not going to win, so why make that into the plot of the fic? NaruSasu vs an annoying cockblock isn't much of a story.

On the other hand, you'd have a better story if Menma realized he's not so different than his brother and has gay feelings for Sasuke after all. Then the conflict of the story would be a love triangle between the brothers with Menma trying to keep Naruto away from Sasuke while trying to get him for himself. The fact that Naruto got Sasuke's interest without trying while Menma had to struggle a lot just to be his friend only adds to the conflict.

Can you update this story, please! I want to know more!

plz update!

Please update soon love this I want!

Please update soon again I love thi fic I want another chapter please update

Was reading this with my friends
We all liked it
Please continue it
IMenma & SasuNaru

so great, I love it

Damn, your such a prude Sasuke!

Wow this was quick xD

This is really interesting!
I like it
NaruSasu-Hell yeah!
I like Menma too.
I wanna you keep updating please :3

This sounds like it's going to be a fun read, looking forward to more!