Iwillgotosleepiwillgotosleppiwillgotosl- OH SOD IT THIS IS TO GOOD! GOODBYE SLEEP!

I want to weigh purebloods pureplus are so weird to love a and I think Jacob will finally don't Ron Weasley if I know Ron cheats on Hermione with lavender Brown I hope Ron I hope Hermione breaks up with Ron Weasley and I hope Draco Malfoy he has feelings he upset he did not like combining and Harry Potter movies and stuff and this is a fanfiction but I hope Draco two kids from it it's a dare-born but Hermione of Ron Weasley

Fantastic!

I like the idea of this story but I think you would greatly benefit from doing some editing and story reconstruction. You can still get the same idea across but with some minor changes to make the story flow better and make it more realistic.

Why doesn’t Draco just get Snape to make the potions? He is a potion master.

You’re so cute with your author notes sometimes! Lol.

Draco why can't you use the potion on Hermione?

translation: nice angst

AMAZE! WOW! PS I LOVE THIS STORY!

WONDERFUL!

give me a high-five! Great job!

Dude, no. Just no. Your characters are way too cliche, high school idiots and are way out of character John at fuck no

I liked this, well done.

Wow. Just wow. This was surprisingly beautiful. Heartbreaking and beautiful. I read this thinking I was going to enjoy some possessive Draco and maybe some good smut and ended up with one of the best fanfiction stories I've come across. Draco just kept getting more and more diabolical and I thought there was no coming back for him and I was ok with that. I was kind of looking forward to him becoming the new dark lord and burning the world down but you somehow redeemed him in the end. Like I said it was beautiful and I haven't cried this hard over a story in long time. Thank you for sharing this. It's one of the few stories I'll read over again.

Wow! Really great story, I enjoyed reading it so much! Thank you for sharing! :)