I loved it! Very, very well done. I don't know if this would have happened - I prefer thinking that Shang and Mulan lived long and happy lives together - I still love it. Keep writing!

Amazing. So good. Really enjoyed this confused boy trying to figure out a puzzle he has not the remotest tools to understand.

Oh this was good., I love the illusion and strength!

That was an awesome Mulan story. I think Xing's quiet introduction to Yan Yi and Lady Yi were very well done.

Dear Rose:

See, this is why I hate Pinyin. Every time Hsing was referred to by the Communist spelling of his name, my mind automatically read "Crossing", with the result that I could think of nothing for the entirety of the story except deer moseying across a country road. Surely, that wasn't the effect you were going for.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Like your other one this is fantastic. You really should write and publish a book.

Love it!

You killed me with one tiny sentence. When you murdered (because it was a murder!) Shang I swear to you, my heart stopped beating.

I was waiting a funny denouement not this! T.T

But thank you anyway because it was beautiful and I loved it (but please, pretty please, stop murdering Shang)

Good.

Fantastic!

Muahaha, I love this!

Really good!

Great story! I enjoyed it!

Sounds exactly like something Mulan would do in her old age. Very sad for Shang...

Wonderful story, and very well-written! I love badass Grandmother Mulan. :) This is such a unique look at the character, well-done.