a great story shame it did not continue

in the first paragraph you ask "do i die?" we all must die at some point some more than others
if you understand what i mean then you understand

ha ha very funny Mystery very funny...

i'm reading this its good there's a few errors mostly missed letters but good all the same

i love the story as of yet and will continue to read it to it's ending

you have a way with words i can see you becoming an author of a New-York times best seller.

Oh my gosh the feels! ! ! And the budding romance! ! ! So sweet! I love it! Ps there's nothing wrong with a short chapter if that's all you can do currently, it all depends on you and how your life is going. ;)

Very interesting story, I like how you have it separated into episodes but this chapter felt like a partial episode to me. Nice work all the same.

Cool chapter, a bit short but good :)

Cool.

Cool new chapter! I really love your story line so far! Keep it up :D

I really like your story so far and I can't wait to see where your plot line goes! ! ! ! :D

By that point the blasted shield been mentioned

Starlight. Falling for the sharpshooter need i remind you mystery reader of all the times finn's skyskywrit. Has fallen apart in mid air

Hello mystery reader long time no read which is why im restarting this story

hi long time no read hope for more updates soon