Reviews for In The Shadows
Guest chapter 48 . 5/14
Great story, thanks.
Guest chapter 48 . 3/23
This is still an incomplete ending. This particular story may be over but there is still so very much that is unanswered. Is SM going to have a secret identity? If so, what is it going to be? "Clark Kent" is a non-issue as that ID has been exposed. A new ID has to be unassailably emplaced. What about the potential for a SM-Kori-WW love triangle? Kori may well be of the "the more the merrier" mindset but I doubt that WW & SM are. Will there be a "Fortress of Solitude?" You mentioned Daxam but is Supergirl out of the picture? What kind of trouble will Lois cause? What about Lynch & Waller? Where is Darkseid's daughter? There are just far too many questions.
Guest chapter 46 . 3/23
I forgot to mention that you have quite a few spelling errors.
Guest chapter 45 . 3/23
The State of Florida is only a glorified sand bar. The "hills" in the northern part of the state are basically sand dunes. You don't find real dirt until you get close to the Georgia State Line. Somewhere in that area sand has blown over bedrock and the sand eventually gives way to genuine soil.
Guest chapter 36 . 3/22
The Green Lantern Corps does NOT police just the Milky Way galaxy, they police the ENTIRE UNIVERSE! In DC comic book canon the planet OA is at the exact center of the universe. According to the now old-style canon the universe was divided into 3600 sectors with only ONE ringbearer per sector. Why only one makes NO tactical or strategic sense whatsoever. Our sector now has at least 5 Green Lanterns. There could be 1000 GLs per sector and there still wouldn't be enough.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/22
"On your left." Really? Oh, hah-hah. I get the reference. It actually is amusing
Guest chapter 21 . 3/22
Just thought I'd say that I'm enjoying your story. HOWEVER, you do have quite a few grammatical errors. It's amusing how quickly you wrote off Lois. You might find this amusing: Sometime in the mid-70's the old "Superboy" title wrote their own AU version wherein Kal's ship lands somewhere in the African rainforest and is raised by apes a la Tarzan. It was both silly and interesting at the same time.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/22
At least you haven't included "Beppo the Super-Monkey." Br-r-r, that was a horrible idea from the'50's or '60's. A Kryptonian monkey-it even wore a blue shirt, red shorts (but I doubt that it wore a Super-Diaper), and a red cape. Yup, the idea was as bad as it sounds! Originally both Beppo and Krypto were test subjects for Kal's ship (which itself was only supposed to be a fully functional scale model).
Guest chapter 15 . 3/22
No Kara Zor-El? Too bad.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/22
The "S" in SHAZAM stands for "the WISDOM of Solomon" (emphasis added). So why does everyone seem to portray Shazam (the ORIGINAL Captain Marvel, by the way) as a pathetic little boy? I just don't understand.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/22
I used to know someone who would always say "Kent Clark" instead of "Clark Kent." Since this is AU fan fiction why not "Reed Richards" (nudge, nudge, wink, wink)?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/22
I've been trying to remember the last time I saw a payphone. I think that it's been at least 20 years. How many people under 40 even know what a payphone is, or is it was? Are there even any functioning payphones anywhere in the world? I think every community should have at least one working payphone for both sentimentality as well as for emergencies.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/22
You mentioned "PBR" early in this chapter. About 50 or so years ago many of the brand names of beer in this country were of German origin.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/22
WW is NOT a metahuman. If she IS a demigoddess, then she is part whatever Zeus is. Hypothetically ALL gods/goddesses are extraterrestrials because they don't have human origins.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/22
"Death?" Maybe Kal should join Justice League Dark.
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