Come baaaaaaack

Come baaaaack... 3

seriously wtf you need an angst tag on this... If your not going to continue it would be awesome if you posted a summary of what you had planned

Interesting read. Parker getting bambuzzlled by a mark (CIA or not), flies in the face of what made her the best pick to succeed Nate. The team minus Nate and Sophie failing miserably is also a stretch. Hardison resenting Parker as the lead (not going to happen he loves her too much) and Eliot being silent would not happen (super human). I was completely on board until Eliot went off the rails. Morgan sounded like a good match for Eliot, although early on she was more impressed with Hardison.

This is the problem with creating a super human, you can't have it both ways. Eliot not being able to control his emotions is ridiculous. This fic is an interesting read, but reminds me of the interrogator from the college. Total BS, Nate is smart enough to have that conversation with Eliot one on one away from everyone else. As far as Eliot bolting, not going to happen. Eliot really does think Parker is crazy, Hardison is clueless, sophie is a liar, but nate does understand him, respects him, and would never dress him down in front of the team.

is thre such a thing as reading crack?

Bravo...

Can't stop reading.

excellent, very much like watching the actual show. Thanks, more please!

Wow, that was outstanding.

Love it, love it, love it. Nice touch with sophie checking on her boys

Loved it, "Nothing says don't trust me like trust me...LOL

I'm intrigued!

Such a beautiful portrait of pain and betrayal. This, this is exactly what that feels like. Thank you.

This is SO good! Hope it's still chugging along! You can do this! :D