Reviews for The Unexpected One
MathewEatsGlass chapter 16 . 10/1
I know it’s unlikely that you’ll see this, but if by some chance you do, please finish this fic. It really is amazing and I would love to see the ending you had planned. Anyways, I hope all is well in your life. Take care!
LMCuba chapter 16 . 5/11
Absolutely loving the story. I think it's entirely plausible that Naruto would have these mixed feelings towards Sakura, and anger problems are not far-fetched either. Shikamaru feels a bit OOC but I guess Ino would've tamed him pretty well lol. The different dynamics work really well between characters.

I hope you still plan to finish it. It'd be a shame if such a good story doesn't get a proper ending.
int chapter 16 . 3/25/2019
Wish you would update
Sasa chapter 16 . 12/15/2018
I'm tired if Naruto being angry all the time.

Time for the good bits...
Guest chapter 16 . 11/24/2018
please continue. i beg of you. the story was just getting good. please, i beg continue and finish the story.
whippingit.1765 chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
Great story so far! You had me on the edge of my seat. Plz update soon!
Suave Jiraiya chapter 16 . 5/31/2018
Wow, I thought this story had died a long time ago, I'm glad to see that it still lives. You're right, it is a short revised chapter, so there isn't a whole lot to comment on. I thought the best and most relevant part of this chapter was Naruto's conversation with Sasuke. It was written very well, as Naruto does have every right to feel the way he does. You really conveyed to the readers the anger and frustration Naruto's feeling that it seems none of his friends Sasuke aside, will even try to understand what he's going through. I will repeat my concern from my last review of don't rush Naruto and Sakura's reconciliation, as it wasn't that long ago Naruto was hating Sakura with every fiber of his being for what she did to him. You don't want their reconciliation to become unrealistic or unbelievable by putting them together too quickly. Nice teaser at the end of Sakura and Hinata's upcoming confrontation. Although my thoughts haven't changed from my chapter 13 review of the whole Hinata/Kiba side story. Anyway, thanks for continuing to write this great story and I eagerly await the next update, soon I hope.
magnolia11 chapter 16 . 5/23/2018
Oh wow this is so intense!
I love where this is going, can't wait for the next chapter.
Harry chapter 16 . 5/19/2018
So any reason why you deleted chapter 12 and 13? or were they just notes?
Troa95 chapter 16 . 5/19/2018
This story is sooo emotional! I've never loved gaara more than in this story! I think he's really my favourite. I wish he doesn't have to leave sumi behind to go to suna, that would break him so much. Let them all live in the same place, so i dont have to get depressed even more with this story ahaha!
I've been waiting so long for the next chapter, the confrontation between sakura and hinata, can't wait.
You have an amazing story here, and i have to thank you for sharing it with us. And I hope to see the end of it someday! Thank you so much
Princess Spara chapter 16 . 5/18/2018
Omggg I was so happy to see this updated! Welcome back! I hope life stops being crappy! This chapter was too good and the end. Dear lord I was wondering when it would happen.
rosy2700 chapter 16 . 5/18/2018
i enjoyyy this story ! Naruto just pisses me off. He has a right to be angry but i understand Sakura ! Let her not be the victim anymore, I want to see her angry too ! She made a mistake thats it lets move on and please i hope she will not be lovesick over Naruto later on !
TubbyPusheen chapter 7 . 3/23/2018
Tf like hell Sakura is a bad mother she was thinking about her kid ...( _) and Sasuke ugh dude stfu lol who is HE to talk ( 3) siiiiiit tf down punk~ ...so is Sakura everyone’s punching bag now :(
naj677 chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
more shikaino narusaku. nice
Eternal-remembrance chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
This is a great story so far and I am looking forward to the new chapterskeep it up
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