Its 'Asgard' not 'Asguard'.and its 'Midgardian' not 'Midguardian'.But overall its to be a major criticizer.

AMAZING

Okay, I'm gonna take a guess here. Forty of the pancakes and three pounds of the bacon were consumed by Thor? Oh and, WHERE IS MY LOKI?

I love it!
Keep going!

Whoa, that was great! I really enjoyed that, and Steve and Peggy were just too adorable! I really felt for Bruce, though, it was kind of crushing to see everyone else finding dates while he got friend-zoned.

CLINTASHA!

A lot of this felt really right in your face when it should have been smoother. Other then that I thought it was pretty good.

Very cute story. Not many people can pull of a good high school version, but you're is by far the best I've read. thanks for posting.

Really good! Enjoyed it immensely :)