Aw, man. . . They were just about to kiss!

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This is the best story I have ever read! It’s so beautiful and I love how much detail you put into this. This story is truly a work of art made by an Angel. Because you are an angel and a child of God. I hope you are very well and this story will always remind me of how someone could love me the same way that Jack and Elsa do. I have read this multiple times because like I said, this is a work of art made by an angel like you. I hope you know that you are truly someone to remember. Please stay well and I LOVE this story! -Alanna

It was amazing u are very talented i am 13 and have read so many jelsa fanfictions this one is byfar the best (a word of advice practice on ur spelling )

Where are the spaces between the lines :( but good story though, looks interesting

I knew that was going to happen. Classic non-betrayal-but-sorta-really. gosh darn it
u r doin great

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

interesting idea/theory on jacks blood color
when you wrote about the blood i though of dark blue slime tho gross i hate slime
nice job so far

nooooooooo but i understand that it is all too soon too soon

nevermind, i don't like this story anymore, u killed it with hurting jackfrost, this is more of a hurt and comfort story.

making elsa look stupid, best part of this story, i'm so surprised that he hadn't left her.

lolololololololol, gotta love this scene. it's official, someone is screaming right now.

too fassssssst. it usually take around 50k word them to have feeling but i guess ill take this.

She finally says it! :D Jelsa forever!

Im just happy I was able to log in