Lesson learned. Or not. Anna clearly enjoyed that little game.

So hot! I love it!

Naughty

Thank you for writing :)

That was...

Dayummm son. That was hot.

That is a great play on how Elsa would act. I wanna see more of that side of her. Yum.

Wow, that's so hot. Love a bit of romance between my favourite characters, Anna and Elsa :)

I'll never read your stories in public again... Think I'll just head home... Haha, thanks a bunch, that was... wow... yeah... Thanks!

wow. that was incredibly well written! im really digging predatory elsa ;)

I would love to see more fics with Elsa in charge like this. She still comes off as caring for Anna and not cruel. Predatory!Elsa just seems right.

I love it. It's both cute and really, really hot, and your writting style makes it even better! Hope to read more from you soon :)

Really good! You should write more like this!

Ahh, I have a thing with fun times after waking up, especially if they're like this. Great display of Elsa's ferocity and need here. All too often I read about Elsa being the meek and inexperienced sister, so it's nice to have her in charge for once. Nothing too overly descriptive, which is great for me since I like to imagine some things myself, but just enough to give me the butterflies when I read.

Nice story here. Definitely looking forward to more from you!

I wish there would be a chapter two ;_; BUT OH MY GOD PREDATORY ELSA IS SO DAMN HOT I CAN'T EVEN—

This was pretty awesome I would deff like to see some more.