Reviews for The Narrator Parable
ButtonPusher427 chapter 2 . 7/20/2019
Make it so the narrator has to watch as Stanley disobey him until he does the games ending. It would make sense because when the narrator sees Stanley unplug the phone he realizes that stanley is a real person but instead of narrative contradiction and the story folding in on itself the narrator and Stanley become friends like in the confusion ending.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2017
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deathlyHealer chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
I can't write fanfiction. Sorry. Maybe you should read other TSP fanfictions. It might give you ideas.
deathlyHealer chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Whoa. This seems exciting! I wonder where you'll go with it...?
hyacinthorectus chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Have you heard of the Narrator-is-Employee-432-and-We-Need-a-Story-to-actually-spread-this-around?

How about that?

I assure you, I'm going to tell you a decent plot /when/ I think of something that doesn't involve Portal in it.
ammyDOS101 chapter 2 . 4/25/2014
YAAAAAAAY! There are others in this fandom! I am just so happy. I understand how you can't really continue something like this, so I don't expect you too. Therefore, no suggestions... XD But, this is very wonderful. I love it!
pay-your-hecking-taxes chapter 2 . 3/7/2014
how about talk about how The Narrator dealt with the misbehavior and Stanley's sentience. How he no longer can simply order Stanley to do this and that and his feelings on discovering that this might not be a bad thing. That now he is no longer alone. But Stanley is tired of all this and wants something different. Stanley wants to get away but the narrator doesn't want that
The Fluffy Panda chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
I loved it, please continue?
FractalTetris chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Or press the 8 button 88888888888888888888888 times...
Panthalassa Blue chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
This is amazing - you show off the parallels between The Narrator and Stanley briliantly. Please, continue.
Polocatfan chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I loved the story.