What a waste of time. If I knew it'd end like this, I wouldn't have read this to begin with. The ending was such the literal definition of "cop out". I'm going to re-read some fluffy one-shots to get this awful taste out of my mouth.

"Jaune was a good kisser" uh to be fair he did spend the several chapters ago kissing three women before Blake so it's very much expected that you know he should be at least capable enough of doing that well.

but joking aside it was pretty funny to see that sweet moment interrupted by a jealous Wiess

Alright looks like it's very much clear that this is a Harem not a Love Square, not going to lie I don't really ship Blake x Jaune that much I usually ship her with Sun or Yang (or both of them) but I have to admit this chapter is pretty fluff inducing even for those who don't ship them.

Ah so this is a Love Square (is that the proper term?) this made things even more interesting. Especially now from the looks of it Pyrrha will have to finally act on her feelings rather than hide them, I wonder which ship will win Lancaster (Ruby x Jaune), Dragonslayer (Yang x Jaune) or Arkos (Pyrrha x Jaune) I like all three ships which for me is extremely difficult to pick though

I love the premise, plus I've been wanting to read a Yang x Jaune x Ruby fanfic recently. I'm looking forward to how this plays out.

When are they going to fuck him

Putting in cardin because you needed a generic rushed conflict to avoid making this boring, really?

Story is hella corny. Still gonna give it a try though.

That was indeed probably the most mature decision. Good story.

Well... that's one way for a guy to lose his virginity.

So the four of them are planning to attack Jaune, knock him out and take him somewhere in Beacon where they will most likely gangrape him?

jaune semblace...O,O..epic prediction

Ahuh "not explicit enough to be M" You have a handjob in the first chapter, please do STFU sir. Honestly, just cause you never say the word "cock" doesn't mean it isn't inappropriate for children.

Liked this story.
Keep it up. Laters.

Really? Did you seriously think you could sneak in that bit trying to address your readers about no smut in this story? Look I don't care if you have lemons or not but don't pretend your story is really any good, that bit you put in would have work if your story was actually well written but it's isn't, you drag this fic down even more by acting just as dumb and immature as the people who Demanded sex in this from you to begin with. Congratulations you got absolutely nothing to show except looking like a total dipshit.